1. Read of/about sth

Read about 更常見一些

2. There are some parts of theworld where even now people cannot write.

e.g. There are some of my friends who even now are single.

3. History, saga, legend的詞匯互換

4. Migration 移進

emigration 移出

5. If they had any 在文中做插入語

e.g. I would buy my girlfriend a diamond ring if I had anymoney.

6. Especially flint

強調(diào)flint，especially后需稍做停頓

7.Remain（不及物動詞，后面接名詞、形容詞）依然存在

The divisions between rich and poor remain.

替換exit或still…

8. Even the bones of the men havedisappeared without trace.

e.g. Her brand-new car, which she just bought, disappearedwithout trace.